

Swan song?What I have learned about writing a poemSwan song?
(this title is wrong)
It should be the way I say it should It should contain the right words The right phrasing, the commas Full stops and pauses in the right Places. The lines should run as I say they should and should not Break where I say they should Not. It should be about, the subject The story, what I say it should be about- That subject, that story (for it should have A story, or subject defined). It should be Clear, ambiguous only in ways I say
It should- and I have hundreds of yea


Ghost ShadowYou are a figure impossible- Black shape swooping over pebbles, The grey area at the edge of my mind. All about you the air ripples Ruptured by your imposition Standing there, waiting.Ghost Shadow
Wingless, you are absence- Draining the light from the sea, Swallowing the tide whole. Your own opposing double, White shiver on the water. Ghost shadow, waiting.


Inside the pictureThis is us, our secret selvesInside the picture
Behind the painted glass Inside the magic moving picture We trace our patterns Intricate windings of heart and History. Living ciphers, Talking a code we call Language- our mother-father-tongue Binding and dividing, We sway like the river split The man, uncertain, alone, Eyes opening in the crowd’s Seething centre to that awful hole- He doesn’t know.
Do not betray what you have seen here Do not pass on our secrets’ words- The passes of internal whisperings And truths triple-checked that echo wi
But on the plus side, I bow to your superior penmanship.
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To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet;...
Time for you and time for me,
And time yet for a hundred indecisions,
And for a hundred visions and revisions,
Before the taking of a toast and tea -TS Eliot
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